our critique

On chris’, the head looks like metroid. Change his major. Last statement retracted. Ribcage looks a little small. Spine a little bit too long. Dark outline, shading needed on the sides of ribs to add plane change. Has his own personal mark makings dark lines and “goofieness” around work. Used page space well, composition wise. Pelvic region somewhat confusing.

Karen’s is Small on page. Good connections to the spinal column with ribs, right side looks a little bit larger then left. Hard to do a curve on a straight on back view. Scaling a problem, small pelvis. Light line marks, needs shading to give definition to planes. Bigger on the page solves most of the issues presented.

Mikey Thinks he sucks. Not quite Good values on the sternum and ribs using darker line qualities. Well balanced. Sternum pops out showing depth. Needs connections to the ribs. Good form and anatomy. Very boxy. Good wrap on the ribs, not drawn thru on the back.
No spine.

Cal – Pelvis might be a little big too witde. Right side seems a little bit bigger. Good contour lines that work well with shading. Rib cage looks like a different angle then the pelvis, good spacing between pelvis and rib cage. Line values need a little more consistency. Spine darkens up a little big. Gestural on the pelvis, but not iin the ribs.